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Here it goes It's 5 A.M; and I'm wide awake; moonlight My windows opened them up for you to come inside And you always say: Love's not a disease; but loving me is! It's like driving a fast car with no wheel! Ooh…If only James dean Had seen your wild eyes You're…A real daydream You taste like paradise Baby it's a heart; it's a heart; not a hotel I try but I just can't get you out of my head Baby it's a heart; it's a heart; not a hotel I try but I just can't keep my hands to my self Wasting time's Easier than chasing it as it flies And That's why I think of you all morning; noon and night And I always say: Love is not a black sin; but loving you is! It's deep and overdose and dangersly! Ooh…If only James dean Had seen your wild eyes You're…A teenage daydream You taste like a true lie Baby it's a heart; it's a heart; not a hotel I try but I just can't get you out of my head Baby it's a heart; it's a heart; not a hotel I try but I just can't keep my hands to my self We both know you're the one That I can't live without… Now that you're in my heart You can't ever check out… Baby it's a heart; it's a heart; not a hotel I try but I just can't get you out of my head Baby it's a heart; it's a heart; not a hotel I try but I just can't keep my hands to my self Baby it's a heart; it's a heart; not a hotel Baby it's a heart; it's a heart; not a hotel you're in my heart forever
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