Anyone want to read my story?

Just click the link. Feel free to comment and give me some constructive critiscm :) hope you like it! http://www.wattpad.com/story/2098195-a-virtuous-soldier The Virtuous and the Vice lands have been at quarrel for over three hundred years. Each thinking that the other is a sinful and evil place. Amara Bloom has followed in her fathers footsteps and joined the Vice army, becoming the youngest captain to ever be appointed. She is fiancee to the feared and powerful general Damian. The match was chosen by Lucian, ruler of Vice, the shadow prince himself. As Amara embarks on her journey to find what she is missing, she discovers the cold hard truth; that the Virtuous Lands and the Virtuous people are not at all what she was brought up to believe.